I feel like you're trying to suck up and that you want everything to be about how youre doing stuff for people. I dunno. based on what happened on DC and now here. Whats with you always talking about money and how youre doin shit for free, or money is coming out of your pocket? honestly, I dont know what to think about you.
And yea, I agree with others saying that the second one looks like the cars are sliding into each other.. I also agree with Zach when he's saying there is too much dead space. he's not telling you to add to it, but that whole section at the top thats just beige, crop that shit out. And also, if youre gunna put the "JT productions" stuff on there, make it smaller, because it seems like you want everything to be about you. your money, your idea, your badge, your video, your credentials, etc. I'm kinda sick of it.
Sorry. But its not all about you. and no one cares what credentials you have. All we care about is what we see and so far, I have not been impressed by your video, or photoshop work. prove me wrong.