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[aNna]

she is a real life model lol
and models in those magazines are in a different type of modeling all together

you are a boy. she is a girl. there are tons of magazines that have real life models, skinny models, and plus size models. anything really geared towards under 19 is a good magazine. like seventeen.

 

[KumA]

Her poses and smiles are forced not natural.

 

[hayabusa03rx]

I think everything came out great this time around except for the bit of overexposure on the sky. What kind of filter? But besides that, cheers.

I agree on the overexposed sky. You should really work with the sun instead of against it. Either blow the sky completely out or work with it.